tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post6258157436364300597..comments2024-02-07T15:31:14.706+00:00Comments on Lust Bites: Midsummer Erotic Haiku CompetitionMadeline Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16485601071092171174noreply@blogger.comBlogger50125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-14151312119908648502011-06-18T00:00:06.157+01:002011-06-18T00:00:06.157+01:00Between warm thighs, I
Tie a dove to your moist to...Between warm thighs, I<br />Tie a dove to your moist tongue.<br />Fingers for feathers.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-36306607648905092102011-06-17T12:49:35.883+01:002011-06-17T12:49:35.883+01:00You strike the anvil,
A warm breeze flows from my ...You strike the anvil,<br />A warm breeze flows from my hips<br />…sweet shafts of sunlight.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-69822012128878200182008-06-27T19:41:00.000+01:002008-06-27T19:41:00.000+01:00How about a glassOf wine, some strawberries, andA ...How about a glass<BR/>Of wine, some strawberries, and<BR/>A bit of leather?<BR/><BR/>Playing with foreskin,<BR/>Making him beg - his neck arched<BR/>In exquisite pain.andietherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11875615192437415869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-34707389493205557302008-06-27T04:19:00.000+01:002008-06-27T04:19:00.000+01:00A few more...The wet kiss of lipsEager mouth, slic...A few more...<BR/><BR/>The wet kiss of lips<BR/>Eager mouth, slick on my thigh<BR/>Grinding as we dance<BR/><BR/>Skirts pulled above the waist<BR/>We sit close, rub, kiss and frot<BR/>Our tender flesh meets<BR/><BR/>Your flower descends<BR/>I feed, your dark butterfly<BR/>Tasting your nectarNadirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00692947173962844694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-75466848559620290422008-06-27T00:31:00.000+01:002008-06-27T00:31:00.000+01:00Oh, my. I do enjoy this! Poetry isn't my cup of te...Oh, my. I do enjoy this! Poetry isn't my cup of tea, usually. <BR/><BR/>My wicked girl smiles<BR/>As I take another woman<BR/>She touches herself<BR/><BR/>Hot oil slides over me<BR/>Strong hands follow the path down<BR/>And find my centre<BR/><BR/>Your body behind<BR/>Pushes me onto cool tiles<BR/>Echoes grow louder<BR/><BR/>“Let me,” breathless plea.<BR/>“Not yet,” firm command. “Not yet. <BR/>Nadirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00692947173962844694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-36022227865629734062008-06-27T00:25:00.000+01:002008-06-27T00:25:00.000+01:00Crisp white linen sheetsYour lips, neck, shoulders...Crisp white linen sheets<BR/>Your lips, neck, shoulders, open thighs <BR/>You taste of warm salt<BR/><BR/>Rain in pine forest<BR/>We fall to the sodden ground<BR/>Dripping everywhereMaryanne Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12461617567840191096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-76517533109716298602008-06-26T23:37:00.000+01:002008-06-26T23:37:00.000+01:00You arch at my touch My tease, beg me - plea for m...You arch at my touch <BR/>My tease, beg me - plea for more<BR/>Let me hear you scream<BR/><BR/>*smirk*Nadirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00692947173962844694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-42235554939098598782008-06-26T12:29:00.000+01:002008-06-26T12:29:00.000+01:00The movie is slow,but your hand in my pantiesmoves...The movie is slow,<BR/>but your hand in my panties<BR/>moves faster. Oh yes!<BR/><BR/>Planned night of passion;<BR/>kids in bed, dog fed, oh no - <BR/>cat on the pillow.Louisa Hartehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06874588031197342544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-90725629427280159912008-06-26T02:18:00.000+01:002008-06-26T02:18:00.000+01:00On my own, thinkingOf you with dildos and plugsAnd...On my own, thinking<BR/>Of you with dildos and plugs<BR/>And good vibrations.<BR/><BR/>Wrapped legs around waists - <BR/>Midsummer night's love<BR/>With intimate friends.<BR/><BR/>Breathe in sweet smoke and<BR/>Growing addicted to your<BR/>Breath, eyes, hazy skin.andietherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11875615192437415869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-6718660363805832662008-06-25T14:21:00.000+01:002008-06-25T14:21:00.000+01:00I do go very well with red wine and cheese, or lat...I <I>do</I> go very well with red wine and cheese, or lathered with thick oil... Err - sorry -<BR/><BR/>I do go very<BR/>Well with red wine and cheese, or<BR/>Lathered in thick oilMegan Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702395970450200829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-49156715311726367972008-06-25T14:04:00.000+01:002008-06-25T14:04:00.000+01:00I was just about to sleep with you for using the s...<I>I was just about to sleep with you for using the subjunctive when you called me Olive.</I><BR/><BR/>It was just my way of saying that you'd look delicious with something stuffed inside you.Jeremy Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980177431018869829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-23778439434474127662008-06-25T14:01:00.000+01:002008-06-25T14:01:00.000+01:00I was just about to sleep with you for using the s...I was just about to sleep with you for using the subjunctive when you called me Olive.<BR/><BR/>Hmph.Megan Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702395970450200829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-34544060083761702612008-06-25T13:55:00.000+01:002008-06-25T13:55:00.000+01:00Ahem Olivia, not "Olive." I must have had Provence...Ahem <I>Olivia,</I> not "Olive." I must have had Provence on my mind. Sorry!Jeremy Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980177431018869829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-1469868990757273812008-06-25T13:54:00.000+01:002008-06-25T13:54:00.000+01:00Maître corbeau, sur un arbre perché ...Sorry! Refl...Maître corbeau, sur un arbre perché ...<BR/><BR/>Sorry! Reflex, you know. Let me try again:<BR/><BR/>Vos fesses douces, madame,<BR/>Me font suggérer que nous<BR/>Nous tutuyions.<BR/><BR/>[I probably screwed something up somewhere in there, but I'm hoping all that reflexive-verb and conditional razzle dazzle will distract Olive and Mary M. from noticing.]Jeremy Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980177431018869829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-24171195391034248722008-06-25T13:37:00.000+01:002008-06-25T13:37:00.000+01:00Les jours, je dope mesPensees; les nuits, son lang...Les jours, je dope mes<BR/>Pensees; les nuits, son langeur<BR/>Penetre ma chairMegan Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702395970450200829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-60157920908690387062008-06-24T14:27:00.000+01:002008-06-24T14:27:00.000+01:00*Under him, I watch you fuck someone else. I want...*<BR/>Under him, I watch <BR/>you fuck someone else. I want <BR/>you. Not this strange cock.<BR/><BR/>*<BR/>How do I want you?<BR/>In the bed, on the floor, in<BR/>the car, on the train…<BR/><BR/>*<BR/>Your cock is a thing <BR/>of beauty. The one reason<BR/>I’ll get on my knees.<BR/><BR/>*<BR/>Now, you demand. I<BR/>obey. Hurrying, I strip. <BR/>Someone’s coming. Fuck.<BR/><BR/>*<BR/>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-28833470940191119122008-06-23T18:02:00.000+01:002008-06-23T18:02:00.000+01:00Mary M. - you're not doomed at all - and you're co...Mary M. - you're not doomed at all - and you're counting just fine! Allowances are made for different dialects! <BR/><BR/>The way I speak, "generous" "offerings" and "mastering" are each 2 syllables, but lots of people would say them as three. British English swallows syllables, American English pronounces them, and Oxford English rhymes "Magdalene" with "maudlin". And if you want to give us a Megan Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702395970450200829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-5334877138329565752008-06-23T16:50:00.000+01:002008-06-23T16:50:00.000+01:00Lol. Too complicated for me. I understand the prin...Lol. Too complicated for me. I understand the principle, but it seems I can't count the syllables right so I'm doomed. For me, generous would count as 3 syllables - but of course, I'm thinking in French. Still, I might give it a try if I find spare time this week. Great offerings from the posters :). Good luck everyone!Mary M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03726644215852180932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-43194473940775003022008-06-22T22:26:00.000+01:002008-06-22T22:26:00.000+01:00One word: urgent, hissed."Slut", a sibilant caress...One word: urgent, hissed.<BR/>"Slut", a sibilant caress<BR/>that makes her openJoanna Chambershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11008683032460114886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-82086787105072377012008-06-22T16:01:00.000+01:002008-06-22T16:01:00.000+01:00I'm an easy bratYour hands are heavy, they biteLov...I'm an easy brat<BR/>Your hands are heavy, they bite<BR/>Lovely marks by youAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-18641670365737271452008-06-22T15:51:00.000+01:002008-06-22T15:51:00.000+01:00Slow, slow I beg youYou never listen, thrustingPus...Slow, slow I beg you<BR/>You never listen, thrusting<BR/>Pushed too far, grateful.<BR/>~Kit~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-41244865047219199212008-06-22T11:20:00.000+01:002008-06-22T11:20:00.000+01:00Anonymous - or anonymi, if there are two of you - ...Anonymous - or anonymi, if there are two of you - add a comment with a call-sign for you, sweetheart, or we might not know what to shout out...<BR/><BR/>magdalune - yes, they're horribly addictive; before you know it, you're counting the syllables of everything you say. But we like monsters at Lust Bites, as long as they have human heads.Megan Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702395970450200829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-8251848071521491652008-06-22T04:35:00.000+01:002008-06-22T04:35:00.000+01:00(You've created a monster. I hope you're happy.)Su...(You've created a monster. I hope you're happy.)<BR/><BR/>Such lovely cheeks. No -<BR/>Not there. Here. And between them.<BR/>You writhe in pleasure.andietherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11875615192437415869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-79153269603137739612008-06-22T02:42:00.000+01:002008-06-22T02:42:00.000+01:00My flesh red and rawMy pleasure bound up in painHa...My flesh red and raw<BR/>My pleasure bound up in pain<BR/>Happy is my heart.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-10625457380079829342008-06-22T02:38:00.000+01:002008-06-22T02:38:00.000+01:00memories go fondmy heart seeks not to let goperhap...memories go fond<BR/>my heart seeks not to let go<BR/>perhaps this time loveAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com