tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post5054165299998647929..comments2024-02-07T15:31:14.706+00:00Comments on Lust Bites: "His throbbing member"Madeline Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16485601071092171174noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-83895320102082157902008-04-22T23:09:00.000+01:002008-04-22T23:09:00.000+01:00Hrm, coming a bit late on this one (damn this move...Hrm, coming a bit late on this one (damn this move). I use a few, but it feels kind of repetative after a while, specially with the gay sex. I'm fond of cock and shaft the most, but I've used dick, manhood, length, and hardness (oh, and silk over steel to describe it).<BR/><BR/>The word "turgid" is banned from our house in general. :)<BR/><BR/>The problem is, I don't have that many common phrasest'Sadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01708681580853057497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-84331241027268831652008-04-22T23:08:00.000+01:002008-04-22T23:08:00.000+01:00Hahaha, manroot. Purple helmeted warrior! Hee! The...Hahaha, manroot. Purple helmeted warrior! Hee! They actually sounds more like flowers togehter. <BR/><BR/>I agree with Shanna, I want the tshirt too. <BR/><BR/>I take Jeremy's point about throbbing, but that's fine from an internal perspective. If you could actually SEE the throbbing it would be cartoon like and alarming, no? <BR/><BR/>Oo, yeah, I got sidetracked by the coments. I meant to say, IJohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08988685736635515808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-9820499076649898902008-04-22T17:16:00.000+01:002008-04-22T17:16:00.000+01:00Oooh! I wish I'd been there for coctails. What fun...Oooh! I wish I'd been there for coctails. What fun! And what an interesting list!<BR/><BR/>I love dick, cock, shaft, rod, club. I'm dying to write the writer who can't think of any new ways to describe it and gets squashed by her editor for using "purple snail shell."Delilah Devlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17546662118298693868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-52429935334712921632008-04-22T15:56:00.000+01:002008-04-22T15:56:00.000+01:00Well, when I turn 50, I'm planning on getting a to...Well, when I turn 50, I'm planning on getting a tongue job.<BR/><BR/>From a plastic surgeon, I mean.<BR/><BR/>JE ("Jubilant Erection")Jeremy Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980177431018869829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-18839012700478495222008-04-22T15:47:00.000+01:002008-04-22T15:47:00.000+01:00Okay, OK, I have an older man fetish. Yes. But whe...Okay, OK, I have an older man fetish. Yes. But when I told that to a younger man once, he said, "I only have one image for you: Old men have old tongues."<BR/><BR/>It was probably one of the strangest conversations I've ever had. And I've never forgotten the comment.<BR/><BR/>XXX,<BR/>ATAlison Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13587155568248573683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-68137081070957862732008-04-21T18:56:00.000+01:002008-04-21T18:56:00.000+01:00I am not a fan of prick either. Throbbing is ok. ...I am not a fan of prick either. Throbbing is ok. The one I liked the least: Purple-helmeted warrior.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-52516229698658272082008-04-21T18:39:00.000+01:002008-04-21T18:39:00.000+01:00P.S. That last comment sounds terribly ageist. Rea...P.S. That last comment sounds terribly ageist. Really, I'm not, but there are attractions about age (like <A HREF="http://graphics8.nytimes.com/images/2002/07/02/books/coetzee184.jpg" REL="nofollow">this</A>) and equally flaws. Without creating irritatingly Barbie-and-Ken characters, I think erotica does best to slide around the flaws. After all, lovers do...Megan Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702395970450200829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-67190010109355014962008-04-21T18:31:00.000+01:002008-04-21T18:31:00.000+01:00If anyone missed the bright red box in the right s...If anyone missed the bright red box in the right sidebar, linking to the Black Lace Chat Board, you can <A HREF="http://s1.zetaboards.com/Black_Lace_Chat/index/" REL="nofollow">jump in here</A>. The guidelines are under Calls For Submissions / Black Lace Guidelines.<BR/><BR/><I>57 year-old salami</I> - URGH! It disturbs me when a story makes a huge deal of a man's numerical age. An older-man Megan Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702395970450200829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-38606564229293777602008-04-21T18:04:00.000+01:002008-04-21T18:04:00.000+01:00I tend to keep it simple because I reckon any word...I tend to keep it simple because I reckon any word for penis that has the reader either a) laughing or b) thinking "Wow I never knew you could call it that" takes them out of the story. <BR/>So, like Portia, I use the simpler most appropriate more well-known terms and hope my readers just get it and move on to the good stuff :)<BR/><BR/>p.s. I'm baack!Kate Pearcehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04079485861541059016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-75469518629406637922008-04-21T18:03:00.000+01:002008-04-21T18:03:00.000+01:00I don't mind "manhood" in certain contexts (histor...I don't mind "manhood" in certain contexts (historical or fantasy settings) but for everyday use, I'm a fan of cock. (Well, yes, yes I am...as of pussy, but we were talking about writing here, weren't we?)<BR/><BR/>I find I fall into the cliche of making all the penises/dicks/cocks/pricks in my work HUGE. Trying to learn to avoid that!TeresaNoelleRobertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08542291750786128688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-6235988773876897012008-04-21T17:45:00.000+01:002008-04-21T17:45:00.000+01:00I never liked the term 'manroot'.I never liked the term 'manroot'.Lilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13680968217522258788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-15265161391140423012008-04-21T16:44:00.000+01:002008-04-21T16:44:00.000+01:00"Throbbing member" tends to make me envision a p..."Throbbing member" tends to make me envision a particularly heated discussion in Parliament.<BR/><BR/>And then it makes me giggle.Sacchi Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10801164916418570059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-62103572930200482022008-04-21T16:39:00.000+01:002008-04-21T16:39:00.000+01:00I've never been asked to avoid using cock, prick e...I've never been asked to avoid using cock, prick etc by BL.<BR/><BR/>BL have just updated the guidelines BTW. They're posted on the message board.Vincent Copseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15233265999577106740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-49970499583724614662008-04-21T16:29:00.000+01:002008-04-21T16:29:00.000+01:00*rereads AT's signature*SG = Slick Glans*tries aga...*rereads AT's signature*<BR/><BR/>SG = Slick Glans<BR/><BR/>*tries again*<BR/><BR/>SG = Semen Guzz...<BR/><BR/>*blushes and shuts up*<BR/><BR/>SG = Serious (about) Genitals<BR/><BR/>*bonks head on desk*<BR/><BR/>SG = Sex Goddess<BR/><BR/>Okay, close enough for this early in the morning. <BR/><BR/>*scurries off before she gets herself into serious trouble*Shanna Germainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09277611199517242974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-66159106321484839042008-04-21T16:22:00.000+01:002008-04-21T16:22:00.000+01:00I loved this post...such a great read!I let my cha...I loved this post...such a great read!<BR/><BR/>I let my characters choose. Some characters shy away from the term cock, others don't. I will say that very few of my characters use anything flowery, just because their creator can't stand to write it :) <BR/><BR/>I've said it before and I'll say it again: <BR/><BR/><B>I'm a cock and clit girl, all the way.</B><BR/><BR/>Can I have that on a T-shirtShanna Germainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09277611199517242974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-81115663619011374152008-04-21T16:20:00.000+01:002008-04-21T16:20:00.000+01:00The worst I've read was "his 57-year-old salami," ...The worst I've read was "his 57-year-old salami," which permanently put me off cured meats. <BR/><BR/>We <A HREF="http://alisontyler.blogspot.com/2008/04/spank-me.html" REL="nofollow">talked cock</A> on my blog the other day, after engaging in the companion conversation: <A HREF="http://alisontyler.blogspot.com/2008/04/all-about-my-vagina.html" REL="nofollow">"All About My Vagina."</A><BR/><BR/>Alison Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13587155568248573683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-79998658680081877152008-04-21T15:52:00.000+01:002008-04-21T15:52:00.000+01:00Well, half my work in writing for BL is trying to ...Well, half my work in writing for BL is trying to avoid using 'pussy' and 'cock' etc. My understanding is (was?) to try not to name them at all, as in 'He slid inside her' <BR/><BR/>Interesting, also, the idea of not incorporating too many different words for these parts, in the same book. <BR/><BR/>I think my work just got easier...<BR/>But I'm interested in what other BL writers think on thisMadeline Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16485601071092171174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-1783463604152946472008-04-21T15:09:00.000+01:002008-04-21T15:09:00.000+01:00Black Lace prefers we not name these partsReally? ...<I>Black Lace prefers we not name these parts</I><BR/><BR/>Really? Never came across that prohibition.<BR/><BR/>"Today we have naming of parts. Yesterday,<BR/>We had daily cleaning. And tomorrow morning,<BR/>We shall have what to do after firing. But today,<BR/>Today we have naming of parts."Megan Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702395970450200829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-12685019333112566312008-04-21T14:59:00.000+01:002008-04-21T14:59:00.000+01:00I associate prick with the slang for a "highly unp...<I> I associate prick with the slang for a "highly unpleasant person - esp male."</I><BR/><BR/>Ah yes, those "personality" words (unfair to both sexes):<BR/><BR/>She felt the tip of his arrogant prick against the lips of her cowering pussy. But she really would have preferred that he put his complete dick up her silly ass.Jeremy Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980177431018869829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-81083665941340802582008-04-21T14:54:00.000+01:002008-04-21T14:54:00.000+01:00But Black Lace prefers we not name these parts...o...But Black Lace prefers we not name these parts...or do we have new guidelines. And yes, I know we do name them, but my understanding is we're supposed to avoid it as much as possible. Otherwise I would use 'cock' pretty much exclusively. And 'hard on' which I like. But I do use 'rod' and 'length' and such to try at least to avoid the words BL frowns upon. Same with the girlie parts, no?<BR/>Madeline Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16485601071092171174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-90810110219293206242008-04-21T14:50:00.000+01:002008-04-21T14:50:00.000+01:00I don't know that I have a preference, but I will ...I don't know that I have a preference, but I will say the machinery and food groups amuse me. I'm not a fan of prick because it's too distracting for me. I associate prick with the slang for a "highly unpleasant person - esp male." Total negative connotation.limecellohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04302402669154868499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-36445723395896856032008-04-21T14:38:00.000+01:002008-04-21T14:38:00.000+01:00If all writers had to curb their words to what "mo...If all writers had to curb their words to what "most people" use, the language would be poorer for it, I reckon... like telling artists to paint only what other people can see.<BR/><BR/>I'm all for throbbing, actually, but I consider it a sensation - so to write "his throbbing whatsit" from a female character's point of view becomes odd. And of course anything with naff associations has to be Megan Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702395970450200829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-84364532044621710882008-04-21T14:00:00.000+01:002008-04-21T14:00:00.000+01:00men do not talk about their ‘glans’Now you tell me...<I>men do not talk about their ‘glans’</I><BR/><BR/>Now you tell me. No wonder I've been getting funny looks at dinner parties.<BR/><BR/>There's a certain phase of arousal that does feel to me like my fill-in-the-blank is throbbing. A kind of stiff, pulsing tension, perhaps going hand in hand (ahem—or, as I originally typed it, <I>ah me</I>) with the kind of "ache" that has nothing to do Jeremy Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980177431018869829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-69321552774782600622008-04-21T12:05:00.000+01:002008-04-21T12:05:00.000+01:00See, I like cock precisely because it is blunt and...See, I like cock precisely because it <EM>is</EM> blunt and aggressive. And I like dick because it's crude, vulgar and blokeish. I used to try and vary the nouns but I don't bother much now. I prefer repetition. I think sex-writing is one of the places where repetition and accumulation can actually work in your favour, as long as you don't go bonkers with it. So cock and dick for me (please!) Kristina Lloydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01260838019243820610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2685152641201332954.post-36175290124605604892008-04-21T11:43:00.000+01:002008-04-21T11:43:00.000+01:00Elfhood! Aw gawd, please no-oooo!Elfhood! Aw gawd, please no-oooo!Vincent Copseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15233265999577106740noreply@blogger.com